Critique

Emma Scott

Last class,  everyone presented their projects and we gave each other feedback on how we can improve our cinemagraphs.  I was second to last and was super nervous, so I stumbled over a lot of what I said.  I eventually got my point across and everyone seemed to think that it worked.  The only problems were the reflection in the window and the poor quality of the export.  The only way I can think of to fix the reflection problem is filming it at another time of day.  I'm not sure what to do about the quality of the cinemagraph.  When Mr.  Gonda tried to help me, he seemed just as confused as I was.  I will keep brainstorming for more improvements.